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10/05/2008

Let's invade Burma

The politicians seem gung-ho for an invasion. From the BBC:

Get tough with Burma, says Clegg

Aid should be parachuted into Burma within the next two or three days - whether the authorities there like it or not, says Lib Dem leader Nick Clegg.

Burma's military-run government is refusing to let most aid workers over the border of the cyclone-hit state.

Tim Costello, of World Vision charity, said staff had "literally overflowed in tears" for not being allowed to help.

But International Development Secretary Douglas Alexander said acting without permission would be "incendiary".

'United front'

Prime Minister Gordon Brown has also condemned the actions of the Burmese government and said he was "determined" that aid would get through.

Now if we get away from the BBC's dumbed-down, one-sentence-equals-one-paragraph style, and if we make a small but relevant change, we have something rather different:

Aid should be parachuted into Burma within the next two or three days - whether the authorities there like it or not, says Lib Dem leader Nick Clegg.

Burma's military-run government is refusing to let most aid workers over the border of the cyclone-hit state. Tim Costello, of World Vision charity, said staff had "literally overflowed in tears" for not being allowed to help. International Development Secretary Douglas Alexander said acting without permission would be "incendiary" but Prime Minister Gordon Brown has also condemned the actions of the Burmese government and said he was "determined" that aid would get through.

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